Cover letters are an essential and powerful way of introducing a reader to yourself. They are usually the first point of contact between you and that reader and as a result, are the most important document in your introduction. I've written about this before with, "Extreme Cover Letters (That Don't Work)!". As you're about to see, it's time to write about it again. Apparently, my point has not yet been made!
The cover letter is your opportunity to set the stage for what's to follow. It gives you an opportunity to specifically say why you're interested in contacting the recipient. It can provide valuable context for everything else to follow. It is extremely important to take advantage of the cover letter!
I'm going to make some comments about the following letters, that I don't intend to be dis-respectful. I have to admit that I'm frequently astounded by the lack of effort candidates make to introduce themselves. If a resume submission does not have my name in the cover letter, that candidate is instantly facing an uphill battle. They are simply too lazy to add a name to a letter. They think that quantity of letter sent, will make up for lack of quality in letters sent. Obviously, that's flawed thinking! (BTW, if I'm included in some blind email to likely dozens and dozens of recruiters, that email is deleted.)
Conversely, if a cover letter mentions my name, and goes on to mention something specific about my company or my background (for example), I'm immediately more receptive. It's not an ego thing, it's the demonstration that the candidate took the time to find out something about my company and me, and then made the effort to write a letter directly to me. If they can spend a few minutes to get my attention, I will certainly spend a few minutes to look at their materials.
Here we go (the punctuation and spelling is just as it appeared in the original letter:
"Hi Bob,
Attached please find my resume. I'm interested in a copywriting position.
Thanks,
All the best,"
Here's a copywriter who doesn't take the opportuity in a cover letter to write anything interesting. This person is (obviously) not a strong candidate for copywriting! They can't even get the spacing right!
"Good morning,
I am reaching out to you in regards to corporate recruiting.
I am a hyper creative marketing wiz. I have learned how to promote on a small scale and now I would like to take those skills and apply them to larger businesses."
I've always believed that it's a better idea to let someone else sing your praises. It rarely works when you try to do it yourself . . . as in this case. A "hyper creative marketing wiz" would certainly be able to do a better job of introducing themself!
