In following up on yesterday's post regarding resume fundamentals, there's another element of your self introduction that is extremely important. In fact, it's so important that it set's the tone for presenting your resume. If you don't approach the cover letter or email properly, you reduce the chances of your resume even being considered.
It is essential that you personalize and target the cover letter or email. Believe me when I tell you that people who deal with resume for a living can tell instantly (if not sooner) when we're reading a "stock" cover letter. The assumption quickly becomes that the candidates is lazy and not interested in taking the time to make a powerful first impression. That extends to how the person will perform their daily tasks . . . by taking shortcuts, with a lack of thought or attention to detail. Obviously, not the impression you're trying to make.
Personalize that cover letter or email. Let the reader know that you've taken the time to do some research, before just firing off another cover letter and resume. Mention something about the reader and/or their company. For example, when I read a cover letter where someone mentions my background as a photographer, I know that not only have they visited my website, but that they've actually spent enough time there to find and read my bio. I like that . . . it impresses me. If they've taken the time to find out something about me, I'll take the time to find out something about them. It's simple and makes all the sense in the world.
With that in mind, I thought I'd share some examples of just ineffective opening lines:
"During my research on recruiters who place sales leaders in the financial services industry, I have identified Bishop Partners, LLC as a valuable resource."
"I appologize I signed up for a service that auto applies to certain jobs matching my criteria. For whatever reason it did not attach the resume. I'm including a copy for you to review."
"I would like to learn more about what you are seeking regarding the director of marketing and strategic development position.
"Please accept my resume and feel free to contact me at any time at (phone number)"
"I have reviewed your job specifications and I believe that I am a great fit for the job."
and finally . . .
"Hello-
I am in search of a creative job opportunity. I have been having some difficulties in my search for a position. I am wondering if you could provide me some help in my search. Thank you for your time. I look forward to hearing from you." (no resume attached).
I'm sure those examples illustrate my point! Be sincere, respectful of your reader's time and personalize your cover letter or email. Personalization is a simple first step in developing the relationship you're looking for with your reader.