It figures that after my post of just over a week ago, "Opening Lines For Cover Letters" that I would receive another cover letter with an opening line that just blows the others away. I couldn't stop myself from sharing this one too. I'm not trying to be cruel here. I'm sure the writer sent this with sincere feelings and in the hopes that it would in some way provide insight into the personality, goals and values of the candidate.
I'm afraid it probably does just that. The reader of this opening line has to assume that it is heartfelt and appropriate. The only other possible assumption is that this person has a rather oblique sense of humor that was lost on me.
What's the line you ask? Here you go:
"Hi, my name is Tom and I'm a Taurus. I enjoy long walks on the golf course, Cajun food and Rock and Roll. I'm looking for someone who shares my passion for great creative and who isn't afraid to take things to the next level. Let talk and see if we connect – I could be the one you've been looking for."
That's the opening line for a Creative Director position. Sounds sorta like a personal classified looking for someone to date. I suppose it might have impact on some employers . . . but I'm inclined to doubt it. Maybe Tom pasted in the wrong copy from a document he was previously working on . . .
I had to respond and let him know he wasn't quite right for this particular search.
We work in a glorious industry. You never know what might be next!